Better Writing Initiative: Description
Better Writing Initiative is an exercise at improving writing techniques.
Description uses a picture as inspiration to describe a scene, or parts thereof.
It was dark in the club, and damp. The feeling of wetness was in the air, on the floor, and on the skin of the people around. I couldn’t see much of anything, bodies were just illuminated by flickering, erratic beams of coloured light. Sometimes, it would change to the music, other times it seemed to have nothing to do with anything at all.
Finally, I found Martina again, dancing against one wall, all by herself. She was illuminated by the deep, red glow of a projector, who cast a screen from Metro 2033 onto her, with the words “FEAR THE FUTURE” in bold letters underneath it, and the “THE” shone right into her crotch – her hairy, naked crotch… My slave had undressed while I was gone, and stood there now, unashamedly, displaying her gorgeous, well-proportioned body for everyone, who could glimpse her in the dark, red, dingy light, in this remote corner of the club. So, essentially, only for me, but feeling, hearing and seeing all those other people around us, dancing, drinking, enjoying themselves, all of them potentially watching, potentially… wanting her.
It heightened her excitement to the point at which her nipples stood on end on her large, heavy, slightly sagging breasts she was so proud of, her long brunette hair, a mere black shadow around her face, was flinging wildly from side to side at her moves and that crotch… that lustful, lusting, lascivious crotch that I had spend so much time in, the pussy she had dedicated to me, and me alone, the pubes that she had cultivated, just because I liked it, the strong, feminine thighs, her wide, well-rounded hips… all of that swung seductively and mesmerizing right between FEAR and FUTURE. It was, where I was headed.
Image is by Rosario Gallardo and licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 2.0 Generic License.
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